Kia ora! Its Pyper here from St Patrick's School in Greymouth. I really like the way you used very interesting words and cool pictures. Maybe next time you could go a bit more in depth with the sentences. We also had to do this in our class.
Hi Jordin,i'm Syrhys From St Patricks School Greymouth. This is amazing this might be a good activity for literacy. But maybe next time you could revising & edit it a bit but other than that awesome.
Nice poem! I enjoyed reading it And it was very descriptive
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Kia ora! Its Pyper here from St Patrick's School in Greymouth. I really like the way you used very interesting words and cool pictures. Maybe next time you could go a bit more in depth with the sentences. We also had to do this in our class.
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Hi. My name is Deklan. I like your poem about ice cream. It has a cool picture. Good work :)
ReplyDeletehim my name is Aiden from stpatricks school and your poem is really good i lke how its about ice cream. good work
ReplyDeleteHi Jordin,i'm Syrhys From St Patricks School Greymouth.
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing this might be a good activity for literacy.
But maybe next time you could revising & edit it a bit but other than that awesome.
Hi It's Eva from st patricks school, I liked your poem about icecream I liked how you used a nice font for the title, Great Work :)
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