Hi! I'm Kinae from St Patrick's School Greymouth. I really enjoy reading the poem it was amazing! We also did this in our classroom Jerusalem! Blog you later!
Hi I am Emma From St Patricks School in Greymouth New Zealand, and I am a year 8, I really enjoyed this and we did this in our classroom, I really liked the apple idea it was amazing, and I love the excuse for the apples it was good. I encourage you to keep posting blog post because they are really good. Blog you later Emma.
Hi im Max from pompallier catholic school. That poem you wrote was very cool and very different. What gave you the idea of doing appels in your poem? Blog you later:Max
hi im Aiden from stpatricks school think this is really good and it looks like it took time unlike some people but this is one of the best i have ever seen
Hi my name is Antonia an I'm from St Patrick's school.The poem is very good, We did something like that too in my class.I like how you have put a picture and a cool font for your title. Great Job Antonia
Hi Reece,I'm Heidi from St Patrick's school in Greymouth. I really like your poem,we also wrote our own this is just to say poems earlier this year. Heidi
Hi Reece,i'm Syrhys From St Patricks School Greymouth. This is awesome I wish that my Class could do again it looks like a lot of fun and might be a good activity for literacy. But maybe next time you could revising & edit it a bit but other than that amazing.😊
#so good
ReplyDeleteHi! I'm Kinae from St Patrick's School Greymouth. I really enjoy reading the poem it was amazing! We also did this in our classroom Jerusalem! Blog you later!
ReplyDeleteHi I am Emma From St Patricks School in Greymouth New Zealand, and I am a year 8,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this and we did this in our classroom, I really liked the apple idea it was amazing, and I love the excuse for the apples it was good.
I encourage you to keep posting blog post because they are really good.
Blog you later Emma.
Hi im Max from pompallier catholic school. That poem you wrote was very cool and very different. What gave you the idea of doing appels in your poem?
ReplyDeleteBlog you later:Max
hi im Aiden from stpatricks school think this is really good and it looks like it took time unlike some people but this is one of the best i have ever seen
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Antonia an I'm from St Patrick's school.The poem is very good, We did something like that too in my class.I like how you have put a picture and a cool font for your title.
ReplyDeleteGreat Job
Antonia
Hi Reece, my name is Lawrence and I'm from stpatricks school, I really like your poem and think it's really good.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Bayley from stpatricks school I realy like your poem we did one of these poem's w while ago
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ReplyDeleteHi my name is Liam,i really like your poem it was super cool
ReplyDeleteHI im Anthony good poem well done
ReplyDeleteHi Reece,I'm Heidi from St Patrick's school in Greymouth.
ReplyDeleteI really like your poem,we also wrote our own this is just to say poems earlier this year.
Heidi
Hi Reece,i'm Syrhys From St Patricks School Greymouth.
ReplyDeleteThis is awesome I wish that my Class could do again it looks like a lot of fun and might be a good activity for literacy.
But maybe next time you could revising & edit it a bit but other than that amazing.😊
hi my name is liam your poem was good also I like apples
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